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The Replacement by ~Emyn:iconEmyn:





Color bit into his vision like a serrated knife, in unnaturally saturated hues of green, tan and blue. He squinted and blinked, dark lashes flashing over his clear blue eyes in a swift veil. This first view of the city was drowned in the bright sunlight reflecting on the glass and steel of the austere buildings. Slowly, his vision cleared as his eyes adjusted, and he noticed the people. They were a living tide, flowing across the concrete between buildings in a choppy mass. So many different colors and shapes, reflecting individual personalities united in constant busyness.

And blinding obliviousness.

A slight smile curled his lip and his forehead creased as he gazed up at the tops of the skyscrapers. They reached darkly upward, piercing the sky like defensive spikes at a fortress’ edge. It was all so perfectly made, its complexity possessing an intricate beauty. He found himself admiring the work that had gone into making it, how skillfully it had been done. Straightening his dark tie in an unconscious habit, he lowered his eyes back to the people going about their daily business. He was one of them now—in appearance if nothing else—and his duty was to protect them from themselves.

He turned to face the dark glass wall beside him, the sunlight washing down his dark suit and shadowing his shoulder blades in elegant lines. Staring at his reflection, he was almost startled. The tall, broad-shouldered figure he saw was that of an ordinary middle-aged man, unremarkable almost to the point of invisibility. But that had been their intention. Slowly he ran his hand through his receding reddish-brown hair, and traced his thin nose and slightly creased skin. The touch was strange—he knew what he was doing, but he barely felt it. Curious, he touched the glass where the sun was fiercest. He dragged his finger down it in a slow sliding motion, like rain on a black screen. He felt a solid surface, but no heat.

Spinning away from the building, he clenched his fist, making his fingernails dig sharply into his palm. There was no pain—only the knowledge that his fist was closed. Then he nodded as he understood. Of course. They wanted a warrior who would fight despite any wound, so they had given him no sense of pain and a minimal sense of touch. Nothing could be allowed to stand in the way of his performance.

He frowned darkly, the ruthless control of it angering him. He was a weapon, a means to an end, and nothing more. The others before him had been removed when he was finished, and when he got old he would be replaced also. Once the other two like him were completed, they would be connected, with no way for him to escape the near-omniscience of the ones that made him. And every time he touched his own skin or raised a gun and could not feel the steel’s coldness, he would remember who was in control.

Some pedestrians walked by him, closer than the rest, and he lowered his head. Their varied scents assailed him in a thick, choking cloud. His lip curled in disgust, yet he almost felt pity for them. It was a shameful life—never knowing the truth of their existence, trapped in an invisible cage.

He was as much of a prisoner as they were.

As this thought occurred to him, his fists tightened and his teeth were set on edge in a harsh grimace. He looked up again, seeing the world around him in a sharply different way.

He hated it.

The ferocity of the emotion wracked his body in a writhing tremor. He hated this system intensely, yet he was its slave, its tool of control. The only way to complete his work and get out was to fight for that very system. It was a contradiction that made him feel both powerless and fiercely determined.

A grey twitch blinked over the city, but the people did not notice. Out of the corner of his eye he saw the second of the three replacements, standing beside and partly behind him.

“What name did they give you?” the newcomer asked, voice flat and emotionless as his expression.

Without turning, he pulled out his sunglasses and slid them on, tormented blue eyes hidden behind the dark brown ovals.

“Smith,” he replied, his voice low and neatly measured. “Agent Smith.”
©2004-2009 ~Emyn
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Author's Comments

DON'T read this until AFTER you read the story, please. :)



This is my first attempt at fanfic involving the world of The Matrix. It's a daunting subject, but I wanted to do something about Agent Smith (one of my all-time favorite characters) that would portray him in a sympathetic yet realistic light. I purposefully left out naming him until the very end---I want to see when people figure out who and what it's about. I was pleased with the description in the story.

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:iconrmadmin:
This was excellent. Sorry it took me so long to find time to read it, I'm definately glad I found time though. I'm a huge matrix fan (Even named my daughter Trinity (She's in my gallery)), and this is just excellent. Smith is definately an interesting character. Interesting enough that I walked around for months saying "Mr Anderson", and greeting people with "Mr/Mrs Anderson, surprised to see me?" I did know who it was within the first few line. The picture kind of gave it away for me.
:iconemyn:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I really like Smith's character, too. I like to say "Still using every muscle except the one that matters?" :D

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Quis custodiet ipsos custodes?
:iconrmadmin:
NP. :-) I'm surprised more people didn't comment on this though. Maybe the DA community just isn't into reading. :-/ *shrugs*
:iconrushy:
Good prose is hard to come by even on DA.

I knew almost instantly that this was going to hold my interest until the end. Well described and interesting.
Good use of Smiths own thoughts too "It's the smell" from the movie came through well.
Maybe another chapter of how he becomes "Infected by it" will be in order at some later stage.

Bless you for writing this piece.

:+fav:

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In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
:iconemyn:
Thank you very much :hug: This is one of my own favorites of the short stories I've written. I think I may do more in the future, but I'm not sure. Smith is an intriguing character and I enjoy writing about him. :)

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Quis custodiet ipsos custodes?
:iconadiriansoan:
...quite possibly the only piece of fanfiction I've ever liked. Kudos.

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